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My 5 minute short film, silent style no dialogue, a scorned lover gets revenge

My thoughts after having made my 5 minute short film:
I though i edited my short well and cut the music to fit actions and it seemed smooth. This maybe because one of my other subjects is music tech. I also think I chose my locations and actors well also the lighting seemed good.
I think if I was to do this again I would of put some very neutral subtle music over the completely scielent part. Also I think that I would of been a bit more strict with one of the actors who couldn't make it to on of the shooting dates so I had to improvise.

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